It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or a musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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amount of brutality in films is a reason for a lot of problems that we encounter in our daily life.
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we might not feel it, we certainly have to bear the consequences of
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situation.
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, violent movies are known to impact children's’ behaviour. Kids are more vulnerable than adults
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because they can not differentiate real life and a film.
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might cause higher levels of aggression throughout children watching brutal content and troubles with their friendships. While there are people that think it’s not that big of an issue, researchers suggest the opposite. Recent studies have shown that the most violent children had been watching violent movies since they were only a few years old. The other big problem is that people who watch violent movies frequently might have a lot less empathy than others. If people weren’t watching as many brutal films, they would be more helpful to people in need. Is there any way to counteract
this
phenomenon? If I were to decide, I would let violent movies be broadcasted only after 11pm.
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way, children would not be able to watch them and they would be forced to watch family-friendly films. Education is
also
crucial to teach children about differences in blockbuster movies and real life, but
also
about the ways to control their emotions. Proper education for mature people is important too. Publicly financed campaigns would have a huge impact on adults’ attitude towards violent movies. Social media campaigns were proven to be able to change people’s mindset if done correctly. In my opinion
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we should reduce the amount of violent content on the TV, but it’s even more important to teach our children about controlling anger and emotions. It is still not too late and if we act now, we can reduce harm made by viewing brutal content.
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