Today, the internet and TV have created that chance for ordinary people to become famous. Is it a a positive or negative development.

It is irrefutable that automation tends to bring various changes in the individual's life. In today's

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masses have great opportunities to become popular through the internet and small screens. A number of reasons are responsible

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its influence and I believe that it always projects positive impacts on people's

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. I would like to delve into both

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points in the upcoming paragraph.

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with, there is a positive development that I need to consider. First and foremost, a huge variety of platforms are available for the masses. Folks can demonstrate their talent and post videos on social media apps

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as YouTube, Instagram and Facebook.

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, viewers have access to numerous entertainment channels audience can enjoy enormous

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programs on different television channels and

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includes several non-identical talents of distinguished celebrities.

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, television has access to

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of programs like

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comedians

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,

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and reality shows.

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, there are

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certain negative sides of small screens.

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, children have some detrimental effects of

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trend. Teenagers copy de behaviour

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watching the harmful content movies illustrated on

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. Exemplify, people upload movies including violent content on YouTube.

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to

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, characters are

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moving towards online illegal fraud. Youngsters usually copy the content of

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effort

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and upload it with their own name.

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,

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leads to bad effects on the modern era. In conclusion, after looking at both sides of the coin, it can be concluded that online platforms have both merits and demerits. Based on the discussion,

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personally

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that

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is used in a pleasant manner it would be beneficial in

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.