You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear sir, I'm Dheeraj SUdarsanam. Living in the Mullenger Road, Braybrook. Recently, when I was talking with my friend who works for the council, I got

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a private developer is planning a shopping centre in Laura streer, Braybrook which is the

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street to my neighbourhood. I

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surprised and happy at the same time, because it brings a lot of facilities to the suburb. It is very hard for the residents living in

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suburb to stock up on the basics. The nearest shopping mall is around ten kilometres away. The plan to open a shopping mall in

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area is really good news for the residents. We are really interested in the plan and we want to know a bit more about the shopping centre. Kindly, give the information about the shops that are going to open,

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of the shopping centre, jobs it can create

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the local people. I appreciate a response from you. Regards Dheeraj

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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Certain people truly believe that planning for the future is a complete waste of time. They think that the present should be the main focus. Do you agree with this view?

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?