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Technological developments leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve the environment. While others argue technology itself can solve it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Protection of
e
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nvironment is a soaring concern these days. That it is the responsibility of netizens to control environmental damage by
adapting
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 a simple
life style
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 than depending on
technology
 to resolve
this
 issue is a subject of great enthusiasm as well as stark opposition and at times the both become somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion. On the one hand, those who consider that inhabitants should start living a simple life say that much of the pollution is caused by
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human activities. Not only, do the huge amount of
Carbondioxide
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Carbon dioxide
 is released by vehicles and industries people own, but deforestation has a major impact
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 the rise of
Carbondioxide
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Carbon dioxide
 in the surroundings resulting
to
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 global warming.
For example
, recent analysis has shown that motors drive by individuals and industries play a key role in the increase of
Carbondioxide
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Carbon dioxide
 in the eco-system.
Therefore
, it is the sole responsibility of humans to live a simple life to make
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arth a better place to live by adopting bicycles and avoid hunting for
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wn pleasure.
Conversely
,
however
, people who hold the opinion that the
technology
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 to
resove
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resolve
remove
this
 menace point to the great inventions done by scientists in various fields.
Such
 inventions can be made using
technology
 which might control the emission of poisonous gases from the vehicles and industries. To exemplify, e-rikshaw in place of
fuel based
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 rikshaw is a technological gift which does not release any harmful gases into the environment.
As a result
, it is supposed by them it can be easily resolved through
technology
 without compromising with their life-style. To summarize, it appears to me that it the responsibility of individuals as well as
technology
 to preserve the environment.
Therefore
, both need to play their own part to protect
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 surroundings.
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