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People across the world are more similar than they are different. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globalization has made the world as a
second
 home for everyone.
Hence
 , the gap between the people of different countries is decreasing. To a large extent ,I am inclined towards the idea that more matching characteristics are being observed among the people even though they belong to different countries.
This
 essay would support my idea in all aspects. To commence with, as all developing countries are trying to follow the modern aspects of the developed nations, most of the individuals are trying to imitate the same fashion trend of those rich nations.
This
 results in fashion similarities among the people.
Also
, some industries are considering the management methods of other eastern and western industries to achieve the same success.
As a result
, all the workmen of
this
 institutes are indirectly following the other nation fellow beings.
For example
, as Japan is considered as an example for creating a good environment for the employers to work, many are following the same techniques used by it in India.
Last
 but not the least , mobility of people around the world can
also
 lead to a shift in their lifestyle to match to the native individuals. Taking about the genetic similarities ,as multicultural marriages are often seen ,
this
also
 leads to a similarity in look wise. The thing
that is
 not to be forgotten for initiating
this
 similar feeling is social media, where individuals of similar mindset meet. To conclude, considering all the aspects I agree that the World is becoming smaller and the similarities among the individuals are increasing day by day removing the country barriers and cultivating a unique environment for the individuals.
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