An overseas friend wants to visit your country on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Recommend the best time of year to visit and why Describe the types of accommodation your friend could choose Say what you would like to show your friend in your country

Dear John, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I was overjoyed when I came to know that you are planning to
visit
India
soon.I am writing
this
letter to you to
advice
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you
the
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best time to
visit
India
. In
this
month of January,there is extremely cold in
India
as you are from Canada which is eminent for its unbearable cold weather, so you will find nothing change, So
next
month is perfect to
visit
India
due to moderate temperature,
therefore
we will get chance to
visit
trued track, where you always want to go,which is almost closed in January due to heavy snowfall.
Secondly
, if I take about accommodation, you can stay with me at my home
otherwise
there is a newly opened five-star hotel which has all the upmarket amenities is perfect for
stay
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.
Moreover
, whenever you come, we will definitely
visit
Himachal Pradesh to see the serene beauty of
Himalayas
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the Himalayas
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and Jaipur
also
, where you can enjoy the Rajasthani tradition as well as cultural food. Looking forward to catching up Best wishes, Naina Sharma
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