More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other products from well-known brands. what are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, people are crazy about buying

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branded cars, dresses and other materials, probably, to show their status of living in the

society

as well as to follow the latest trend.

This

practice has some favourable and unfavourable effects, simultaneously.

This

essay will discuss the major factors behind

this

phenomenon and

also

my opinion, which is not favourable for the

society

.

To begin

with, there are multifarious reasons

behind

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this

situation. The underlying reason is that watching and following their favourite personalities, people want to buy

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expensive branded clothes from the market.

As a result

, they spend

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arge amount of

money

without thinking in advance the negative consequences of wastage of

money

, as just to show off in the

society

,and on the social media.

Secondly

, People tend to buy luxurious cars and other expensive products, to raise their standard of living in the community. Eventually, they start the accompany of the rich and famous personalities.

Thus

, without knowing or thinking about the budget, people like to spend

money

just for the status.

Nevertheless

, I wholeheartedly, considered

this

development is negative.

Firtsly

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Firstly

First

, spending a lot of

money

on famous branded clothes, always, ended up in

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hortage of

money

for living expenses.

Although

this

practice

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their level in

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society

,

this

is not more than wastage of

money

, they rather spend

this

money

to help poor and needy persons.

Secondly

, due to show off, every individual

want

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to have their own personal car.

Consequently

, since more cars are on the road will certainly cause more pollution in the environment.

Thus

,

this

scenario will

comes

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with the negative effects, not only for the individual

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but

also

for the

society

as

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hole. To recapitulate, though buying luxurious cars or branded clothes have some advantages, to increase the living standard, but

however

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it has more negative results

such

as wastage of capital and causing air contamination.