Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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it is a common sense that the process of learning is more effective when children learn with their parents.
Although
how each family should teach and raise a child is a personal matter, I totally disagree that parents are the best teachers for children; because professional teachers have
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ducational background to deal with learning students and children, usually, have
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etter commitment to school when guided by professionals.
To begin
with, in many countries, the prerequisite to acquire a level of education that allows someone to work as a teacher involves not only the capability of dealing with children but
also
a proper degree.
For instance
, in Brazil, it is necessary to achieve a post graduated degree to work as a teacher in elementary schools.
Hence
, that educational background improves the ability
of dealing
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with different personalities and understand how to manage someone flaws. After saying that, it is
also
important to point out that the process of learning is a delicate matter which a lack of
liderance
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literacy
could risk the
efficience
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efficiency
of any chosen method;
consequently
, professionals usually have the ability and the resources to maintain the commitment of a child in some subject or activity.
For example
, teachers in schools alternate between both physical and mental activities to alleviate the pressure regards studying and
also
to grab students' attention to focus on some important piece of information. To sum up,
although
some people claim that parents are the best teachers I totally disagree with that.
Firstly
, professional teachers have
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ducational background to perform a great job with children and
secondly
, teachers in schools have resources and skills to create and maintain interest in youngsters.
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