You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There are two contrast arguments about the effect of

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dvertisement, the

first

one

is its significant influence on customers to force their buy items which are not really needed. The other

one

is the products advertised could aid users to improve their quality of life. In my opinion, I am convinced with the

first

argument and seemingly disagree with the

last

one

because of some reasons will be explained

next

.

Firstly

, writing in the statement of the advantage of advertising,

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could tell us about the latest products may boost up our lives. It is not utterly true , in fact, producers tend to overpromote there products in order to sell as much as possible as nothing is actually good at the

first

version, especially for

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intervening to our daily activities

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as the printing machines. The

first

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was used

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ong time ago but

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the

first

time, it is not

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helpful

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for people until its later version released, faster, more sufficient and effective.

Secondly

, it is about

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marketing.

In other words

, the

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ambition of producer is to bring as much profit as they can.

Thus

, they tend to work out the way to persuade us to buy items even if unnecessary.

For example

, there was a trend to buy washing machines

last

year after an attractive advertisement displayed on

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television. After

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ew days, people lined up in their store to buy a washing machine. I had asked some people why they have to purchase

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ew

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even though they already have

one

, they answered it was because of the advertisement.

Thus

, it is clearly the bad effect of

this

kind of marketing. In conclusion, I agree with the idea that advertising may encourage people to buy unneeded things.

However

, being deceived or not to buy, it is

also

up to us.

Thus

, why do not consider deliberately before purchasing items?