Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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have a very few past

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trend has some benefits, it

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negative

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health and personal life. On the one hand, long working hours affect

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itness and social relationship of a human. If the professionals spend most of their instances at work, they will be used to in sedentary life-

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, and it would be unlikely for them to exercise and rest.

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, they will have the maximum probability of getting sick,

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as obesity and higher blood pressure.

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, they might pass

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with their surroundings.

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, their

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relationships

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intimacy and become fragile, because strong bonding happens when people spend

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together and share their emotions.

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divorce is having no focusing

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, being workaholic drives towards financial stability. Many people put their effort in the office for long periods to prove their dedication, which in turn bring them to the apex of the hierarchy later in their life and create the path of earning more money; because

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labour is considered as a contribution by the employers in the

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of appraisal.

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, many professionals do overtime to get extra payment.

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, giving more

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occupation ensures more income.

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might expose the workers in critical health condition and required them to expend more in the treatments.

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, developing heart disease

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very common

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the employees who work more than average. In conclusion, while spending long periods at

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orkplace is beneficial as it brings more income, it is harmful considering the health and relationship issues.

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, it is a negative trend.