You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is suitable for little ones to be grown up in
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rural areas rather than urban. I disagree with
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statement because metropolitan surroundings provide them better
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, health and employment facilities and
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ountry, jobs are not much available and human beings are indulged in old customs and practices which leads to poor mental development. Advanced towns are the immense storehouse of
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, medical science and job opportunities. There are a lot of schools and colleges available which are great sources of better studies and make youngsters able to survive in
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competitive world. After completing their
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they get jobs because there are many multinational companies and local factories present there in big cities. Health facilities are
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better in these areas. If any individual faces a serious health problem like
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eart attack or any accident, he or she can be treated right away without any delay.
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, Mumbai is a famous huge city in India containing a complete package of all the
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facilities. In rural areas, people mostly do farming and young ones do not get
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hance to have a sound job there. If they want to get placed in a
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company, they have to go somewhere else .People even nowadays are attached to the traditional beliefs which are a great hurdle in the development of a child. Human beings are not well educated and are unable to shape the future of their children. They believe in superstition which reduces
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ental growth of a child. If parents are illiterate, they cannot make their children educated.
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the illiteracy of his parents who live in a village whereas my elder brother got placed in Microsoft after completing his studies in a big city. To conclude, it can be asserted that young individuals must be grown up in cities as compared to villages because of the facilities which are available in towns whereas people of rural areas are not well developed and are yet attached to traditional beliefs resulting in
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educed mental growth of children.
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