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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain to you about my roommate that
he
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 is making many problems during
the
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 stay. I am Jithendra Kumar staying in
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room
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 on the 1st floor of CC HOMES Hostel. My roommate name is Dhanabal who is celebrating parties at least twice a week in the
room
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. It makes me a lot of disturbance and unable to sleep during the night. During his stay, I am unable to concentrate
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 work,especially in the evenings.
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 I have completed my work at the office, I have some more extra work to be completed in order to face Audit queries which will be on
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 month-end.
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, My roommate is learning piano
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 from his tutor who will come to my
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 during weekends. I humbly request you to provide me with a single
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 preferable at the same address in order to reach my office on time. Yours Faithfully, Jithendra Kumar

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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