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Some people think it would be a good ideia for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with opinion? Desribe the skills a person need to be a good parent.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people have discussed on reformulating children’s
education
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these groups, schools should focus on teaching personal skills,
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academics ones. A great example would be finance classes and
also
 how to become a great
parent
 in a
future
 situation. On
this
 case,
first
 of all, a kind of pattern needs to be
tought
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taught
tough
thought
, before elaborating a formal subject.
In addition
 to it, it is necessary to understand if there is really a need to evolve on
this
 issue. Clearly, parenthood is a memorable struggle which most
of
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eople face at least once. Lack of experience dealing on it combined with an intense professional life in the biggest cities of the world, make a tough situation even harder. While
last
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 generations used to live close to their families, nowadays, it is common to have cousins, uncles or even brother
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 on the country or the globe,
thus
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familiar support when
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ecome
parent
 is not easy anymore.
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formal
education
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ext generations to deal with it. Frankly, I agree on educating our children about how to be a good
parent
 in the
future
.
However
, population and
education
autorities
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authorities
 should reach a consensus on how a great
parent
 looks like. In my opinion, a great father or mother should be able to raise their children
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a
 ethical
way
, teaching politeness and charity since the beginning.
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Knowing
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 how to deal with baby’s food
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 and needs. In
this
way
,
the
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society could have in a close
future
 well-prepared people to face even
an
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early parenthood, impacting the
future
 of a nation and its
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citizens
. To summarize, focusing on teaching how to deal with daily routines is
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an
 amazing
way
 that formal
education
 could choose to take soon. Pregnancy and parenthood are
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 that most part of the population will face
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 some point of
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life, and being prepared to make it in the best possible
way
 would be remarkable. It is the best
way
 to have a healthier home-environment to
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 children in the
future
, once criminality and drugs abuses frequently have their
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 on badly structured families.
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