Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefit, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Using animals and their products is a common activity.
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, there are some people
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hink that using them for our benefits is unethical, others do not, even, considering to protect them. In my opinion, I firmly follow the latter's view since it has some valid reasons. On the one side of
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rgument, meat-eaters consider there is nothing wrong in consuming or purchasing animals and its products and I back
this
stand-point.
This
is because it is a natural process that the higher level of organisms
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smaller ones for various reasons.
This
can be seen in our wild-life as well,
for example
, the dear is eaten by the lion and rabbits eat grass-hopper and so on the food chain continues. There are many key ingredients of medicines are collected from the bodies of creatures.
Therefore
,
this
group views that it is normal and they would continue to follow the same path even in the future.
However
, the opponents of the above-mentioned argument think that other inhabitants require to be protected as they
also
have lives.
In other words
, every animal is treated with
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dignity
and respect just like any other human beings.
For instance
, people would avoid eating meat, using these products in cosmetics and commercial purposes. Animal activists strongly protest if any harm happens to other species and they think that it is our responsibility to make a shield to keep away from dangers. In conclusion, people have a different opinion on how to treat other living organisms on
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earth. While some argue that they need to be protected, others think it is unnecessary to do so. In my opinion, every creature has its own mechanism to save themselves from enemies, if they failed to
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rescue
, it is
also
a part of our nature.
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