Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Newspapers
have been considered the most reliable news
source
for more than a century. However
, some people
argue that various newer source
of news
is better than papers
lines. In my opinion, it depends upon the age factors of Change the noun form
paper
people
because our taste changes according to
passing
Correct article usage
the passing
time
. The following paragraphs will explore both the point views with relevant examples.
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of time
To begin
with, Newspapers
are still popular among individuals even though they live in the Globalized world. First of all, old age people
are
still like to read the newspaper Unnecessary verb
apply
as
earlier years and they do not want to change their reading Change preposition
in
habit
. Fix the agreement mistake
habits
Moreover
, Newspaper
is a trustworthy Correct article usage
the Newspaper
source
of transforming data because it is written and checked by journalist
and Newspaper Fix the agreement mistake
journalists
Company
. Fix the agreement mistake
Companies
For example
, 80% of Canadian
trusts Replace the word
Canadians
in
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apply
newspapers
because they think another source
of news
spreads fake information regarding incident occurred
.
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that occurred
On the other hand
, social media is more
preferable among youngsters and highly educated Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
due to
its time saving
and easy carry properties. Add a hyphen
time-saving
Firstly
, there are various social media applications such
as Youtube
, Facebook, Correct your spelling
YouTube
news
websites and many more where individuals can access any news
portal from anywhere and anytime. For illustration, if someone wants to hear news
about the latest football match during college break time but he or she do not have newspapers
handy, in this
case,they can watch news
via their cell phones.
In conclusion, both Correct article usage
the news
Medias
have their own importance Fix the agreement mistake
Media
according to
people
’s preference
. in my opinion, Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
people
should active
on both sides because sometimes they get the Add a missing verb
be active
news
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