Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her  explain why you did not contact him/her earlier  suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear

Jaswin

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Jasmin

, I hope you are doing well. It has come to my knowledge that your contract has come to

the

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apply

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termination and

hence

, you are transferring to the new apartment in Al-Wakra. I am quite thrilled to know that you are moving to Al-Wakra, where currently I am occupying a studio in Ezdan 2. I was wondering if I can help you in transferring to

this

new locality as I am staying here

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the past two years.

Moreover

, I can assist you in shifting your household commodities, while I can arrange a mini truck, which will be easier for you to arrange all things at one single time. I can succour you on my upcoming weekend which is on Saturday and Sunday for transferring the items.

Also

, let me know where is the new accommodation situated exactly in which area. Is it a building or villa portion, and if there is a lift facility available, so

accordingly

will arrange 2 helpers to lift the items. I will be glad to lend you a helping hand and will wait for your response. Best regards, Aarzoo.

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