An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Nowadays, the number of children consuming junk
food
and aerated drinks has increased dramatically.
This
habit not only doesn’t provide children with any nutritional benefit but
also
results in
obesity
among them.
This
essay addresses
to
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the problems caused by the consumption of
such
eatables and refreshments along with, suitable solutions to reduce these issue.
To begin
with, in recent years both parents of
an
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nuclear family are seen working where most of them
gets
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off early to work and
arrives
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home late being so tired that they prefer to buy packed
food
or else order
food
from an app which needs less time and effort
comparing
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to cooking. Children of these families started to love
this
canned
food
because it's much tastier than what moms normally cook even though they lack health benefits .
Moreover
, the processed foods are full of calories which results in weight gaining. Children are more focused
of
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satisfying their taste buds rather than being aware of healthy diets. Understanding
this
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shops and
food
apps provide
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ariety of dishes at a very reasonable rate with
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xtra offer which
attract
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families.
For example
, KFC provides bucket offers every month to attract children as well as adults.
On the other hand
, there are many solutions to
this
very problem;
firstly
every parent must be aware of the dangers behind feeding fast
food
to their children where governments can
also
step in arranging some knowledgeable programs to serve
this
purpose. Parents should take an initiative and work a way out to provide healthy
food
despite their busy schedules. Children must be made conscious about the bad effects of
this
type of
food
so, that we can have brighter youth in future who are more productive.
For instance
, a person visiting a gym due to
obesity
is strictly recommended a healthy diet chart prepared by the trainer. In conclusion, children prefer to eat more restaurant
food
than homemade , which are less in nutrients and that easily cause
obesity
because in
this
modern era working parents sees cooking to be a tedious task after work and as a solution for
this
problem, parents must be informed about the undeniable causes of
obesity
.
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