In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Father

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mother

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equally essential

roles

in the process of their

children

's growing up.

However

, in some countries, their importance and responsibilities are quite different. In

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I will analyse the reasons and discuss the possible changes of their

roles

in the future. There are several reasons for the difference of father and mother in some countries

due to

their traditional societal structure. On the one hand, in some countries, men are carrying on the responsibility as

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breadwinner of a family. Their main tasks are supporting

family

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the family

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financially.

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, in most

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they are outside and their time

spending

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with

children

is limited.

On the other hand

, in those

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women's role is working as housewives and some of them are even deprived

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working outside. So they spend much more time educating their

children

and have a closer sensational relationship

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their offspring than

fathers

.

However

,

this

imbalanced family relationship structure is harmful

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for

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children

's physical and

mental

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on their way

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of

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growing up. Fortunately, with the process of feminism and gender equality, an

inceasing

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increasing

number of

mothers

begin to work and carry on

the

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financial

supporting

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while

more

fathers

have more time and opportunities to accompany

with

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their

children

and

this

is definitely a positive trend.

Fathers

can bring bravery, powerfulness and broader horizons to their

children

which cannot be provided by most

mothers

. With

fathers

' education,

children

's

personality

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will

development

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more completely. On the flip side, in the future

mothers

will concentrate more on

children

's delicate care, which can make their

children

's daily care

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a higher quality.

Therefore

,

although

their educational

roles

are not the same in detail, they will shoulder equal responsibilities together for their

children

's better development. In conclusion, the different

roles

in parenting result from some traditional and historical reasons. But in the future with the development of

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society and people's change of view,

fathers

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and

mothers

'

responsibilitie

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responsibilities

responsibility

will develop as well.