An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.

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It is true that enormous people prefer shopping online than to buy what they need at supermarkets. In

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essay, I will shed some light on both benefits and drawback of

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issue. On one hand, shopping online is the way that customers can save time and get

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convenience. In the detail, only using a computer connecting with the wi-fi, potential buyers

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easy to approach every

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that are extremely far from their accommodation.

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, if American citizen wants to eat Vietnamese fruits

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as dragon fruits or watermelons, he can order on

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ebsite, alternatively

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to shop

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directly or travel to Viet Nam for buying those tropical crops. Following that, companies

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get positive effects from

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trend of consumption (including cutting the store cost or reducing the traditional marketing fee).

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, distance is

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roblem for

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products

production

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, most companies might take an opportunity to expand

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market share.

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, there are several disadvantages coming from online goods’ quality and shipping process.

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, because customers did not check products before they decide to buy something, they might suffer from the problems related

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quality

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as out of date.

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, enterprises

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face

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in the logistic fee.

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, if a customer requires to get

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roduct as soon as possible, the good could be delivered by

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airplane

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that cost higher than other means of transport. In conclusion,

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containing both merit and demerit points, purchasing via e-commerce is

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opular trend that

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modern life in the world easy and fast.

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e-commerce
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consumer satisfaction
product comparison
overhead costs
cybersecurity threats
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global market
carbon footprint
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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping on line.

Your opinion

Plastic bags,bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Write about the following topic: The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children shoul be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adultsz. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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