A long-distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon none essential flights and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

It is sometimes argued that unnecessary

air

travel

should be completely stopped

instead

of restricting

road

transport as both these modes of transport use the same amount of fuel and

generates

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as much pollution.

This

essay disagrees that nonessential aeroplane

travel

needs to be banned.

Firstly

, people need to go to another country for tourism as most of the borders can’t be crossed by

road

and

secondly

,

air

travel

is a source of income for many in different ways .

To begin

with, humans are born to explore and going for some tours in a faraway country is a dream for all, but most of them are unable to achieve

this

due to

various reasons,

such

as want of time, money or some family issues.

Hence

, these people cannot be

further

burdened with the restriction of

none essential

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flights for tourism as international

travel

is more convenient by

air

rather than by

road

or sea, which might take days to reach the destination.

For example

, I live in southern India and if I want to go to see the Burj Khalifa in Dubai by

road

it would take me at least four days to cross India Pakistan border,

whereas

, by aeroplane,the journey would be

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less than five hours. Another reason for my disagreement is a lot of

public

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depends on income from

air

travel

and airports,

also

, it is a good source of revenue for governments. many individuals in the airline industry would lose their source of bread and butter if the flights

are

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abandoned.

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,

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Kingfisher

airlines

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Airlines

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, which was once a major airline service provider in India vanished in

a

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blink of an eye

due to

their cost-effective methods to save fuel and money and

therefore

thousands of its employees were on

streets

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to conclude

, I do not believe that tourist flights should be stopped from flying as it is a way of revenue for many people

as well as

a way to visit distant places.