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Advances in technologies and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree?

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Working hours of manual force due to advanced technologies must be reduced. I disagree because we have
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need human to control machines and we have not automated all working cycle.
First
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 reason is that
someone
 needs
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supervise and control machines. Manual
labor
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 might be retrained for supervising and they would work the same
amount
 of time to
controll
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control
 the machines. Companies need to double
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mount of workers because machines work non-stop and
someone
 must work with them too.
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 reason is that automated machines can produce more items and they still need
someone
 to process items
further
. Companies have not automated every step in
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orking cycle they have to use manual workers in other processes.
As a result
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they should double
a
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mount of manual workers to work up the future pieces. Because they can produce
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igher
amount
 of items
someone
 must
processed
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 packed and
delivere
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delivered
 them
further
 and they need more workers to cover on
this
. In conclusion, even with hi-end technologies and automated production they still need retrained manual labour to control machines and due to
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olume of items and not automated whole working cycle companies need workers to process items furter.
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