A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest and seeking your permission to speak
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the event organized by your college on the international student day. I get to know that you have a group of foreign students, and I have chosen a topic named "Bangali diversity" to present in
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new year celebration and winter cake festival.
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of local tourist spots.
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will not only broaden the overseas students' level of
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but
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encourage them to promote our nation
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worldwide. I think the
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to me as I will express that with visual effects and with some interesting stories. Mention able that, I am a motivational speaker and have extensive experience
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for
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which are a microphone,
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multimedia and a
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. I expect that all these amenities will be available
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the stage with your
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decoration. In
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that special day. Yours sincerely, Taslima
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international day
  • cultural significance
  • regional specialties
  • festivals and holidays
  • tourist attractions
  • natural wonders
  • education system
  • technological advancements
  • global development
  • sports and leisure activities
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