During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. * remind him when and where you met * tell him what kind of job you are interested in * say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Cooper, I am Leonard Hofstader, and I am lucky enough to introduce myself to you a few days ago when we both were flying from Paris to London. Not sure you remember me, but we discussed various topics including your famous restaurant business in London. It was very kind of you to

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me to think big for my career and contact you for a better opportunity as you might have a suitable role for me. So, here I am sir, I would love to join your business if you have any opportunity available for me in London as a lead chef. To explain more about my work experience, I am working as a lead chef in Nest Restaurant. When I joined there, I was fresher and during my 5 years of a journey over there, I have learned a lot about the variety of dishes.

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, I am passionate about my work and your restaurant would work as a perfect platform for my career growth.

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, at the same time, you will get young talent, which might be a win-win situation. I would very much like to work for your company.I am hoping that you will give me an opportunity to prove my worth. Yours sincerely, Leonard

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