in some culture, older people are valued most highly. in other culture youth is valued. discuss both view and give your opinion as to which age is most valued?

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Respecting others, irrespective of their background
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is a virtue. In certain communities, they support youngsters while others give the older for the status. in my opinion, I firmly support the
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former one as they lead and manage the world more effectively. In some civilization, they respect the elders in their community
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and often allow them to hold the position of head of the family.
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is because the older generation has sacrificed their health, wealth and many more the betterment of the youngsters and showed
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ight path to them.
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, in Indian culture, the seniors are
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respected by saying greetings, offering seats in public spaces and seeking blessing from them etcetera.
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, to respect their valuable contributions to the society and the world as
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hole, the old are given a prime status in both within the family and outside.
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, the opponents of the above-mentioned argument present that the youth is the centre of the culture and I agree
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the standpoint.
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, it is often seen that family revolves around children significantly in
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uclear family, where parents and one or two children stay together. Eventually, the parents make everything possible for the offspring and obey the preference of the child,
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, the younger generation is highly equipped to learn the most advance technological development,
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, computers, the internet, social media and so on, that obviously, impossible for the old.
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, it is so evident that the youth must
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be hold
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the special privilege in
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society. In conclusion, even though there are some communities believe that pay respect to the old, showing reverence towards youth
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present in our surroundings. In my opinion, we give special status quo to the young since they play
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crucial role in national developments.
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