You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you about a shop that has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner. In your letter: describe what you need ask whether they have these items and ask what they cost.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inquire about some

furniture

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items from your shop. I got to know about the shop from my friend as he buys

furniture

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from the shop. I am Pramod, and I recently rented an unfurnished apartment, so I want to purchase a few pieces of old but in good-condition

furniture

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. I need 4 chairs for the dining room and a decent size

table

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, which can accommodate 3 people. A study

table

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with cabinets where I can store

work related

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work-related

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documents and books. I would like to know if these items are available at your store.

Additionally

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, The chairs and a

table

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are urgent since we don't have any

sitting

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seating

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arrangements to eat and if you don't have those let me know so I can arrange them.

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a study

table

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is necessary, it can be delivered at your convenience. I would like to know the prices of these

furniture

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. You can send me details in my email. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Pramod

Darshita@8612Fri Nov 01 2024

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Organization

Consider organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific part of the task, such as introducing yourself and your needs, inquiring about availability, and asking about prices.

Task Response

You could add some sentences explaining why exactly these items are important for you. This will demonstrate a thorough answer to the prompt.

Organization

The letter has a clear opening, request, and closing, which makes it easy to follow.

Tone

The tone of the letter is polite and formal, which is appropriate for writing to a shop owner.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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