Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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In today’s modern world marketers use

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ariety of strategies to attract people. One strategy is advertising. In today’s generation

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few methods used in advertising are unlawful and unbearable. In my point of view

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I would totally agree with the statement

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, nowadays people are more attracted to visually attractable visuals,

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the advertising companies tend to visualize by adding false information to the content. To cite an example , for fairness cream advertisements they provide false hope that we can become fairer within

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ertain period but up to what extent is it feasible ,

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its unlawful method to increase their sales.

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, some tutors give false hope of 100%

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guarantee if the desired score is not achieved

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how many would

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if we don’t achieve the target,

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it’s a breach of

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aw for the consumer.

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, the most corruption we can see is in

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most of the sites provide false information .the textile websites the image of a dress displays a quality but the reality is the other side with poor quality which leads to unlawful cheating.

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,my own experience once I ordered a

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from Agana fashions ,for my daughter. The colour of the dress isn’t the one I expected

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the quality of the dress was very poor. To conclude, today’s marketing world is aiming at attracting more consumers by providing false information for the earning purpose.

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is not a healthy situation. Advertisements should follow the ethical rules

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government should impose strict rules for advertisers. Media should consider from

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onsumer point of view and follow the correct path of advertising at present and future.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Fully explain your ideas

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?