you work an international company, and would like to spend six months working on its head office in another country. Write a letter to manager. In your letter, explain why you want to work in company head office for six months. Say how your work could be done while you are away. Ask for his help in arranging it

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my willingness to visit
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office for six months that was in another country. Let me explain
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. In our morning you were discussing
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a position
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onsite for an employee who can stay there for six months. I have a valid visa for Canada and was looking for
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time. It will be
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for me to work with
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, learn and understand them in person.
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, they are conducting an Agile session
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month which I can attend and spread the knowledge to my team. It will help our team to improve in delivering tasks and follow the deadlines by learning their process. As you know, I have office provided laptop with me which I can easily carry and resume my work from another location.
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, I can easily participate in daily events and meetings with
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team through mobile and
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installed on my machine. Request you to approve the travel request raised by me to initiate the process for my visit on
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visa and expenses to stay there. Looking forward to
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from you. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Kaur
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional advancement
  • cross-cultural collaboration
  • headquarters/ head office
  • global perspective
  • remote work
  • temporary assignment
  • team dynamics
  • networking opportunities
  • cultural immersion
  • succession planning
  • collaborative tools
  • time zone coordination
  • corporate hierarchy
  • relocation logistics
  • work-life balance
  • multinational environment
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