Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.

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Dear Lolo, Hope you and the baby are in a good health. I am so happy to know about your good news and I just can't wait to meet you both. I'm writing

this

letter to ask your suggestion to decide the perfect gift for

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of you. My entire family is sending you best wishes for starting the start of

new

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journey. I know how difficult it was for you to manage your work and pregnancy at the same time and I always felt so proud of you for the way you've managed everything. And I congratulate you from the bottom of my heart. I know you'd be very busy with all your family members and rituals right now and

then

you'll have your office

also

to resume but you'll have to suggest me a suitable time to visit you. And one more thing, I have an endless list of gifts that I want to get for my new bundle of joy but I

also

need you to help me decide few options of your choice and something that can be helpful to you. I'm sure you will be honest with me on

this

. Can't wait to receive your response. Best Wishes, Sweta Singh

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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heartfelt congratulations
bundle of joy
adjustment period
suitable time
cherished gift
newfound responsibilities
practical assistance
joyous occasion
unwavering support
looking forward

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home. What are advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Some people dislike change in their sociality and their own lives and want things to stay the same. why do some people want things to say the same? why should change be regarded as something positive?