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percentage of students giving good ratings for different for different aspects of McGill University

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Every 5 years, McGill University receives feedback from the students regarding the school’s different services, resources and quality of teaching. Based on the results, it can be seen that the students have shown more satisfaction in terms of the services being given by the school administrators and faculty throughout the duration.
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 the available range of modules being offered to cater to the various needs of the students. Only minimal improvement is seen regarding the quality of teaching and library resources.
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 stagnant growth over 15 years. In general, McGill University continues to improve and develop in different aspects. Through the feedback from students, they gain a better understanding of what needs to be improved on and at the same time continue to build rapport with the students.
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