Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
countries
like
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Great
Britan
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and Australia, there are laws which restrict the
members
of a
jury
in a criminal
case
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access to
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information
about the defendant's past criminal
record
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to protect the person accused of the crime. Many
lawyers
have suggested that there should be certain changes in
this
practice and that
jury
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should be given all the past facts before they announce their decision on a
case
. I totally agree with
this
suggestion and in
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Since
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a long time, it's believed that " Justice is blind ". It's a completely true statement. There have been many cases in which people convicted of crimes are left free,
while
sometimes the innocent person is the one convicted and punished for a crime.
For instance
, there was a newspaper article a couple of months ago which described the
case
of the divorce between a
man
and
a women
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3 kids. It was no ordinary
case
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since the
man
in question had a previous criminal
record
for theft and domestic violence. As the
members
of the
jury
were not provided with the
information
and facts about the
man
's past, they decided to give
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custody of the children to the father. A few months later, the father was arrested, when one of their neighbours contacted the police and complained about the screams coming from the house of the divorced
man
. It was found that the father used to beat his children. One of them had so many injuries, that he needed to be hospitalized.
This
instance just goes on to show the importance
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the
transparancy
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transparency
of
information
and facts to be provided to the
members
of the
jury
so that they make
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decisions
accordingly
.
Moreover
, it
also
helps to spot
out
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weaknesses
in the system and can be used to improve these
probelms
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problems
as
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to avoid
such
mistakes from happening in the future.
Nevertheless
, it's not to say that
countries
have not acted on
such
suggestions given by the
lawyers
. In some
countries
like India, the
jury
system was completely removed from their criminal justice system,
while
some
countries
have made it mandatory for the
lawyers
and the court to provide the
members
of the
jury
with sufficient
information
and data related to the defendant's past criminal
record
. All
this
just goes on to show that justice is not so blind
afterall
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after all
. So in summary, the
transparacy
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transparency
over the data and
information
about the accused
persons
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person's
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past criminal
record
should be clearly provided to the
members
of the
jury
, as to help them make their decision
accordingly
.
Therefore
, I completely agree with the suggestions given by the
lawyers
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