Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Recruiter, My name is Yiqun Zhang. I am a business analyst at Virtusa Corporation. I am writing
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letter to express my interest in the financial analyst position of
SCAD
. My desire to work for
SCAD
started with an enlightening conversation with a retired professor of
SCAD
when I travelled to Savanna
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with you. Sincerely, Yiqun Zhang
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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