Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Although

nowadays

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commercials are essential for creating

positive

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brand image, there is a general belief that some of the adverts make use of immoral or inappropriate content. I fully agree with

this

view. First of all, it is important to mention, that some adverts create unrealistic or misleading

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of the product resulting in

customers

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dissatisfaction.

For instance

, diet pills are claimed to be an easy way

for

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of

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getting slim,

however

, no information about possible side effects is mentioned in the

ads

.

As a result

,

such

ads

just give empty promises to people, who understand that there are many hidden details only after purchasing

this

product.

Furthermore

, most commercials are really disturbing and

forcing

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people to make impulsive

decision

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. A person may have no need

in purchasing

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a particular thing,

however

, the more he or she

is exposes

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to the

ads

, the more one feels the urge to make a purchase.

Moreover

, some advertisements and promotions specifically target children and teenagers, who are especially vulnerable to any pressure. After watching the

ads

with their favorite stars they can’t just resist the urge to buy a product, which may lead to a damaging effect if they don’t get it. It

also

creates

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financial burden for their parents trying to put up with the

demand

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of their children and make them feel satisfied.

To conclude

, I would like to say that

although

advertising plays an important role in marketing, it still has a lot of undesirable effects, which should be better regulated.