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Write about the following topic: Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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There is no doubt that fashion is something people of all age groups are interested.
Although
 wearing the lastest trendy piece of cloth makes them happy, the chance of debt and production of waste materials are the two disadvantages of
this
. In my opinion, I firmly think that it has more negatives than positives.
To begin
 with, the main reason for wearing the trendy dress is
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reference, which means many people, especially, youngsters, they follow the top fashion icon since they consider
this
 has some value in their life. When wearing
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modern clothes, which enables them to showcase their personality in front of others.
For example
, if anyone appears to a programme by wearing a trendy dress with modern style, he will be attracted by others, who present there.
Thus
, they could adorn a special position there.
However
, it has been thought that
this
 scenario created a lot of problem in our society.
Firstly
, purchasing
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these items can not be affordable for many since its exorbitant price. Due to
this
, chances to become end up in debt is high.
Similarly
, many dresses wear only once and
then
 throw out, eventually, the amount of waste produced by
this
 is uncountable.
For instance
, in a recent BBC news, they reported that in the UK itself around 25% of total waste is from used clothes.
Therefore
, the gravity of
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roblem caused by
this
 to the environment is alarming. In conclusion, wearing fashionable clothing is prefered by some. They tend to feel good while doing the same, but at personal and
sociatal
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societal
social
 point of view
this
 can have damaging effects and I personally think that it has more damaging effects than merits. It is highly recommended that the followers should aware
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 their financial status before starting to purchase it.
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