People are becoming famous with the help of TV programs and internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

The chart compares the amount of
water
used globally in agriculture, industries and homes in cubic kilometre from 1900 to 2000 and
water
used in Brazil and Congo in 2000. Overall, global use of
water
rose significantly over the years and agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of the
water
used.
Also
,
water
consumption was higher in Brazil than in Congo. It is evident that worldwide use of
water
for farming was around 500 cubic kilometres in 1990, which rose steadily to about 1000 cubic kilometres in 1950,
thereafter
it shot up by almost 300 per cent in
next
50 years. Whereas
water
used for industry and domestically were negligible in the beginning, and from 1950 onwards it showed an increase in its use, and by 2000 it rose significantly to approximately 300 cubic kilometres for household needs and little over 1000 cubic kilometres for factories.
Furthermore
, in 2000 there was about one 176,000,000 residents in Brazil and 26,500 kilometre square of farmland, while ,Congo had just over 5,000,000 people and 100 kilometre square off agricultural land.
Additionally
,
water
consumed per person in Brazil was almost 40 times more than Congo.
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  • Accessibility
  • Exposure
  • Democratization
  • Recognition
  • Sponsorships
  • Endorsements
  • Ephemeral
  • Fleeting
  • Scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Sensationalism
  • Viral trends
  • Content creation
  • Public eye
  • Genuine talent
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