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Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

#failure #proof #desire #wasn’t
Human generation is always racing and compare who is
first
. The
failure
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atter for several people. Some people think that
failure
 means the
person
 does not
work
 with 100% desire. As per my point of view, I do not believe that
failure
 is a tag that
person
 does not put full effort. To commence with, life is full of ups and downs. Every moment we live is a challenge and we can not imagine or care about
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esult. The result is coming in mind when people are doing something different.
In addition
, numerous of scientist has proof that they worked many experiments and only some of the are succussed. But, that not means their
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 not appreciated in
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orld.
This
 is proof that every
work
 has some value, even though
work
 does not meet the target.
For instance
, Sir Thomas Edition, when he invented the light bulb, he says that
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 know 100 methods that
does
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 not light the bulb.
This
 statement encourages many people to dare to
work
 on something new.
This
 is
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trong movement that changes that
failure
 is not
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 end of the something we desire. On the other hand, the fear of
failure
 has increase chances to change the mind and do not put 100% focus
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 the
work
. Some people stop to think new because of chances of fear and what
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ublic can think or talk about it. To summarize, The
failure
 is not a statement of a
person
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id not give full desire on that.
Although
,
this
 is
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proof that a
person
 is trying to move in life. The
failure
 would be
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ind of step of a big success.
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