Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performance on the screen and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

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modern era, technology has changed our lives fully and give us

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etter source of entertainment. It is believed that there is no need to go out to watch the concerts and programmes live as one can enjoy everything by sitting at home on the television.

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, I partially agree with

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statement and I will explain both sides of

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view. To start with the positives of

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trend, it will save

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time and money of the people as they do not need to rush and suffer from traffic jams to attend the show as well as no need of buying tickets of the show.

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, people who work during the day can spend quality time with their family and loved ones at night while enjoying the entertainment performance on the television.

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it is beneficial for maintaining harmonious relationship among the family members. On the opposite side, if folks do not go out and attend the show, they will miss

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their favourite ones live and take their autograph, which is the dream of many.

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, they miss the moment to cherish their favourite ones by hooting and shouting during the performance which is

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njoyment.

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they will not

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with

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their

friends by sitting at home. To sum up, no doubt, technology has made our life easier, it has both merits and demerits. People should maintain balance in their lives, including the usage of technological gadgets.