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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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 has come many centuries
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ahead
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 era, to the epoch of
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. Physcologists believe, that colour can affect how
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 feel and can
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 have a considerable influence on their
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 to do
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 I will provide certain examples and points to support my view. For many years,
phycologists
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psychologists
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 have hypothesized that colour can have a direct effect on how
people
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 feel, so
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 decorating places
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 as hospitals and offices, a considerable amount of importance should be given to the colour schemes. These theories are being put to the test in modern days.
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, a recent
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 conducted by an international team of
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psychologists
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 showed how the
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capacity
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 the physical and mental
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 of a person changed when subjected to a wide spectrum of
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. They conducted their
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 on 1000
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 having different
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 backgrounds and a wide range of physical and mental
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 characteristics. The results were quite astonishing. They found that almost 90% of the
people
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 who were exposed to the
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 blue and green showed more efficient results at
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healthier compared to those
people
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 who were exposed to other different
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 background of the person under consideration.
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, the
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 showed that
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 who get
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exposure to a certain range of
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 of
colours
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 on a regular basis were more likely to have a relatively stable mental state compared to others.
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 that
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 have a direct effect on a
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 feelings,
health
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 and
their
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capacity
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 for
work
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. So in a nutshell,
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 have a direct effect on the equilibrium state of any and all
people
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.
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,
colours
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 can be used to help
people
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 in hospitals,
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 on
people
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 with physical and mental
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 problems, and
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 help to improve
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 working
capacity
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,
colours
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 play a very important role in an
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