It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our modern world, it is often argued that science cannot replace family, meanwhile

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families are most important and we cannot that far from their family.

Firstly

,I believe that both friendship and family are equally important in our lives.The reason why we say family is important is

because

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it creates

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unbreakable

support

and history having

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hared sense of genetic connection.All our responsibilities and happiness are mainly shared among our families.There are crucial times in life when we need

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family

support

the most.

Moreover

, there are several events like marriage birth and death we might need a piece of advice

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our family members.There are some families where the members lose their personal attachment through disputes and dark secrets.But it is the requirement of every individual to have a family as they can

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ole of a good

friend

, being faithful to each other and sharing their emotions.

In addition

, they

also

provide moral advice from their life experiences.

On the contrary

, a

friend

can

also

play a greater role in every aspect of our lives.

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encourage us to make

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etter choice in many areas like education, job and decision making.They are

also

a source of emotional and financial

support

.

For example

, one of my classmates was facing a financial problem and was unable to pay

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her examination fees.

Then

it was her best

friend

who came forward to deal with

this

problem seeking the

support

of her parents.

Although

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they can be relied upon to offer loyalty and

support

, some of them may not be always willing to sacrifice their lives for a longer time in our every

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. To summarise, friends are obviously important in everyone's lives. But a person should

also

have a family as they can compensate for a

friend

. Presence of both

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clearly irrefutable.