Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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excite

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everybody to go

outisde

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outside

the world and find new things. Some people made

this

a passion or for some employment. International

tourism

increasing day by day and its really

benifical

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beneficial

for people and

aslo

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also

encourage them. According to my opinion,

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am agree

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with

this

content and elaborate in

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future

paragraphs. To begins with, technology really helps to increase

the

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tourism

everywhere in the world because of the photographers or videomakers. The benefit of the

continatal

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continental

continual

tourism

is the

money

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like if

forgieners

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foreigners

come to visit in India, they will bring

frogein

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foreign

money

and they have to exchange their

money

into Indian currency through banks which will grow international rate.

Secondly

, it is

benefical

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beneficial

for local communities people like food and clothing

shoapkeepers

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shopkeepers

or hotel owners or transportation which

also

help them to earn

money

and grow their businesses.

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Furthermore

tourism

also

encouraging

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ew generation to participate in

tourism

and become a tour guide. As many as

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our guide in the country

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as much

hlepful

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helpful

for another country people to find new things in

diffrent

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different

continent.

Moreover

, it

also

encourage

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to those people who are really good in

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their

other

businesses

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for example

, if one individual is expert to making beautiful buildings, visitors more encourage him to make more new art or beautiful

palces

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places

such

as home or any building

desgin

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design

or any statue.

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