A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

Dear Panda, I am so excited to know you'll be moving to Mumbai. The southern part of the
city
, will all its British architecture, is one of the best places to stay,
besides
I
also
live in the same area. South-Mumbai
also
has an edge over other residential areas as it boasts a plethora of public transport. Isn't your office located in Andheri? From South-Mumbai you have a direct local-train connectivity there along with buses. There are two more railway lines which will take you to other parts of the
city
. If in case you are worried that you'll be all alone here, no need to worry at all. Many people move to Mumbai every day. The
city
council organizes bi-weekly meet for new people where you'll be able to meet new people and make new friends.
Besides
, Kala Ghoda, the
city
's biggest festival will be in 10 days after you move.
This
festival will serve you as a platform to make amazing new connections. Cannot wait to meet you in person once you are here. Your friend, Shubham

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