A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Panda, I am so excited to know you'll be moving to Mumbai. The southern part of the

city

, will all its British architecture, is one of the best places to stay,

besides

also

live in the same area.

South-Mumbai

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South Mumbai

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also

has an edge over other residential areas as it boasts a plethora of public transport. Isn't your office located in Andheri? From

South-Mumbai

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South Mumbai

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you have

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direct local-train connectivity there along with buses. There are two more railway lines which will take you to other parts of the

city

. If in case you are worried that you'll be all alone here, no need to worry at all. Many people move to Mumbai every day. The

city

council organizes bi-weekly meet for new people where you'll be able to meet new people and make new friends.

Besides

, Kala Ghoda, the

city

's biggest festival will be in 10 days after you move.

This

festival will serve you as a platform to make amazing new connections. Cannot wait to meet you in person once you are here. Your friend, Shubham

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

179 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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