Today, large shopping centres and shopping malls are more common than small shops. Is it positive or negative trend?

There is no doubt that the mushrooming of big stores

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very common. I personally

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that

this

is a progressive trend because it saves our money and

time

in a great extend.

To begin

with, while purchasing products from shopping malls certainly brings many advantages. The obvious one is that the amount of

time

, a precious commodity, which we can save.

This

is because In these establishments, where they

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various items in a way that the customers can easily

accessable

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.

For example

, there are different sections for women, men, and child and even, the products are categorised to catch attention, by doing

this

, shopping can be done within a limited period of

time

.

By contrast

, in small local shops where the consumers depend on

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salesman

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to pick them products;

thus

it is clear that how the big shopping centres minimise the wastage of

time

.Another merit of the super or

hyper market

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is

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where the purchaser can buy things according to his or her family budget.

In other words

, since the company buy things directly from the manufacture, they could sell at a minimum rate, which may be affordable for every pocket.

Similarly

, they

also

come up with a variety of offers and promotions during

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and celebrations.,

therefore

, many grab

this

offer and buy them.

For instance

, if you go to the local vendors, there hardly will get any reduction. It is often consider going for

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shopping is a pleasurable activity when the customer visits malls that may not be true for local markets. In conclusion, there is a notion that buying products and services from a shopping centre has many merits. I totally agree with

this

statement since it provides

time- bound

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and inexpensive services. It is highly recommended that the small scale industry should transform if they want to survive in

this

competitive world.