In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing .what do you think are the causes of this problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In several

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, The rate of overweighting of

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individuals are arising while their extent of

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and fitness

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declining. There are several

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that causes

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dilemma.

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what are the reason that causes

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as well as what procedure can be taken to resolve

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issues. There are several factors that

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obesity

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and overweight. One of them is to an imbalance between calories taken and calories expended. Nowadays people are inclined to consume Fastfood which contain

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fat and

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sugar

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their product in a way that individuals find it difficult to resist their appetite to consume junk

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, Lack of physical activities

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people increasing their weight. In

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modernization, Most of the people use their private transportation rather than walking or cycling.

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, people have to work for a longer period of

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. They hardly get

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to do exercise. They spend their whole

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sitting in front of a computer at

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orkplace. According to

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organization,

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and overweighting problem once considered in

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countries but now it's rising in both low and

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country because of their unhealthy

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habit and sedentary

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reason

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people are having major

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issues like diabetic, heart disease, hypertension and so on at a very early age. In my opinion, The

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step should be taken to resolve

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issue to have a healthy

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and consuming healthy and organic

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as wheat, vegetables. One can be an

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by maintaining

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alance diet. The parents should be paying more attention to their children to get them having

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.

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can be furnished with a gym room with

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equipment so that,

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mployee can do a little bit exercise at their break

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. School should organize an assembly where children will do some physical exercise before

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classes.

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, people should change their mode of transportation and make a habit of taking a walk. In conclusion, Having unhygienic

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is deleterious to our

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. It is true that many people are having

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and overweight because of an unhealthy balance diet and imbalance

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. But the problem is preventable

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only

by consuming healthy

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and living a healthy pattern of

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. We should not forget that

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is the root of all happiness.