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in many countries today,tv crime series and crime novels are becoming more and more popular. why do you think these crime based tv and books are polular? what is your opinion of tv drama and crime fiction?

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Crime
 fiction is gaining a lot of popularity throughout the world. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reasons why is that the case;
moreover
, I will
also
 share my opinion on the
crime
 stories.
To begin
 with, one of the primary reason for
crime
 stories being the main source of attraction is the suspense that it creates in the reader mind. Studies show that there is more activity happening in the brain watching felony TV shows as compared to sitcoms or romantic comedies.
Furthermore
, people are more invested in
crime
 fiction because they want to solve the problem before the final reveal. Agathe Christe, who is renowned for her
crime
 novels claims that it is the mystery which makes her novels interesting, and she
also
 states that
this
 is why Sherlock Holmes, who is a famous detective, name reverberates all over the world. I am quite a fan of the
crime
 genre. My favourite story is Monster and it is all about
crime
, suspense and mystery.
However
,
crime
 fiction needs to be supervised so that it doesn't incite violence. It should be put away from children reach because it can have negative effects on children growth, and they can get attracted to violence.
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