Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people suppose that as big as possible the amount of scientific research, business, and academic data should be provided, whereas others advocate that it is worthless sharing some important and
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information
without cost. While I think it is useful to share
information
, I still believe that there are some kinds of
information
that should not be provided. I understand why some people hold the belief that
information
needed to be shared widely. The
first
point is that
this
can be beneficial for individuals' work and study.
For instance
, with an enormous amount of database about customers segmentation, marketers could easily plan their marketing projects. The
second
point is that
this
helps develop
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nowledgeble workforce all around the world. By way of illustration, teachers in different nations can approach international method of teaching their student, which help build up a professional education.
However
, I would argue that not all
information
from every field could be shared because of several reasons. Chief among these is that some
information
is much important
that is
not allowed to be provided in public.
For example
, sharing national documents are illegal because
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information
are vitally important to
the
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national security.
In addition
, some
information
can not be provided because of it's value and importance. Some scientific researches take scientists much money and time to find out the results, they could not share their achievement freely. In conclusion, while I agree some kind of
information
can be helpful to be shared to the public, I am still of the opinion that not all the
information
can be revealed for some reasons.
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