If people could choose between a life without working or a life spending too much time working, people would choose a life without work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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IS TO LIVE A BETTER
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.DESIRES OF MANKIND DIFFERS
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PERSONS TO PERSONS.
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IF HUMAN BEING GIVEN A CHANCE OF A
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WITH OR WITHOUT BEING WORK ,ALL WOULD OPT FOR
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WITHOUT DOING ANYTHING.IN MY POINT OF VIEW ,I TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH THE STATEMENT
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THIS
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ESSAY WOULD EVALUATE THE EXTENT OF MY AGREEMENT IN
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DISAGREEMENT.
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,IN TODAYS MODERN WORLD ALL HAVE BEEN VERY HEALTH CONSCIOUS.
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,A WISE PERSON WOULD ALWAYS LOVE TO KEEP THE PERSON ITSELF VERY BUSY.
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,NOWADAYS MANY HEALTH CARE CENTRES AND FULLY EQUIPED FITNESS CENTERS HAS EMERGED BASED ON HIGH DEMANDS.TO CITE AN EXAMPLE ,IN OUR CITY THERE ARE MANY FITNESS CENTRES WHEREAS WORKING CROWD AFTER THE OFFICE TIME, HAS A STRONG DESIRE TO WORKOUT FOR THEIR FITNESS.
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WE CAN NOTICE MORE PEOPLE AT GYM IN THE EVENING SESSION.
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, EACH AMBITIOUS INDIVIDUAL HAS A AFFIRMITY TO LIVE A LUCRATIVE
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.
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TO LIVE A LUXURY
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A HARD WORKER SHOULD WORK HARD,
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THEY HAVE TO BALANCE
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ECONOMICALLY AND HAVE A PROPER TIME MANAGEMENT TO WIN THE BATTLE IN
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.THE MORE THEY WORK WISELY THE MORE THE MORE THEY EARN
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A SHORT PERIOD.
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NO
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AT PRESENT WILLING TO SIT IN
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PLACE AND BE IN THE SAME STANDARDS LIFELONG. TO CONCLUDE ,I ASSERTLY WOULD
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IN TODAYS FASTEST MOVING WORLD ,NO
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ONE
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WOULD HAVE SELECT, A
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WITHOUT A JOB. A PERSON'S STANDARD OF LIVING AND THE ASSETS HE EARNED ALL ARE BASED ON HIS CAREER .
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WITHOUT CONSIDERING TIME CONSUMABLES WE ALL HAVE TO WORK IN OUR ENTIRE
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TO LEAD A BEAUTIFUL FUTURE TO OUR DEPENDANTS.
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