Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Why is this ? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?

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Many people continue to use private motor vehicles like cars and motorcycles despite
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knowing the fact that it is harmful
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the
environment
.
This
may be because people think it saves
time
and it is comfortable to travel in their own private vehicles. The
first
and foremost recent behind
such
a behaviour of the people might be,their thinking that it is
time saving
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.
In other words
, individuals think they can reach their destination more quickly compared to travelling by other means.
This
is because of the fact that nobody
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time
to work and every minute is precious for them.
Thus
saving even a little bit of
time
matters a lot.
Secondly
, people believe that it is more convenient and comfortable to travel in personal vehicles rather than opting for public
transport
or simply taking a walk.By using their own cars and motorcycles they don't have to think about other people
also
they should not be worried about the timing of the travel.Whereas, in
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ase of public
transport
service, they have to wait for it. The over usage of vehicles on the road is a very big problem concerning the
environment
.
This
can be solved much effectively by the
government
.The authorities concerned should take a look at the problem and its
after effects
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,
this
introducing certain norms which will cut down the number of vehicles on the road.
This
would probably reduce pollution.In Delhi
for instance
, the state
government
decided to pass out a rule in which the vehicles ending with odd and even numbers would have a certain day allocated for them to run on the roads and must use public
transport
during these days.
This
was very effective and helped in reducing
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air pollution.
Furthermore
,
g
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overnment can
also
work on improving the public
transport
facilities which would
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attract more people in using these services
instead
of cars and motorcycles. In conclusion, even though people are aware
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the effects of cars and motorcycles
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the
environment
they still tend to use it.
This
is because it saves
their
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time
and is convenient for them.By introducing some
government
norms and developing the public
transport
system, the pollution could be kept at bay and can protect the
environment
.
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