A woman's place in the home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many till 1960s women were not even allowed to vote, it was that year the women revolution took place and women fought their rights and won.
says
that women's place is there home. I Change the verb form
say
uterrly
disagree with Correct your spelling
utterly
this
statement and this
following essay will opine my opinion using relative illusrations
.
Correct your spelling
illustrations
To begin
the deliberation,historically women's role in society was a home-maker. They were not allowed to leave their house without their husband's permission. For example
, In the United StatesAdd a comma
,
Thus
, It took years of scarifice
and struggle of women around the Correct your spelling
sacrifice
world
to gain r
ight to equality in the patriarchal Add an article
the
world
.
Women has
proven their worth in every field of the Change the verb form
have
world
. Since gaining rights women has actively partcipated
in Correct your spelling
participated
f
ield of sciences, education,etc. Add an article
the
For instance
, a nobel
award winner madam curie carved a path for many women to follow and actively participate in inventing new technologies. Change the capitalization
Nobel
Therefore
, women contribting
and making Correct your spelling
contributing
contribution
a
society a better place.Remove the article
apply
Futhermore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
a
educated women raise Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
educated children. Women Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
brings
up generations, so it is important Change the verb form
bring
to
women to be educated and independent. Verify preposition usage
for
For example
, if a woman who has not explored the world
and stepped out their house will not able to teach their offsprings world
values that can only be gainned
by Correct your spelling
gained
expriences
.
To sum up, Women are very strong beings, and they should be given equal Correct your spelling
experiences
experience
opporunity
to proves themselves and rise higher in every walk of life.Correct your spelling
opportunity
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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