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It is observed that communication between family members in today's time is less as compared to the past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?

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Communication
 today between family has drastically decreased at present when
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compared
 to the past. Over the
time
 period, families are more dependent on technology rather than
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emotions. I strongly believe that speaking among family members has reduced, and in
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I will compare the past and the present situations.
First
 of all, it is a fact to be considered that the family members are keeping themself with an
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hectic
ethic
 schedule
everyday
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 in their life in
such
 a way that they cannot schedule
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ime for having a talk with their children, and
this
 is the same with the kids.
In addition
, there is no doubt in saying that, technology has brought a
communication
 gap between families.
For instance
, in olden days parents communicate with their kids
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 during there breakfast or dinner
time
, but today they
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plan
 a day for dinner to speak to their families. Due to
this
, children
maynot
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may not
 receive all the love and care from there parents and they might feel alone which indeed leads to negative thoughts. Another fact to be considered is that
,
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 parents should always look after their kids well beings despite
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there busy works. Because, as said "
Todays
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 kids are
tommorow's
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tomorrow's
tomorrows
 future" it is our responsibility to give all the moral support to them. In order to achieve
this
, parents must schedule a
time
everyday
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 to have a good talk with the kids, know what they are doing with there day to day
activites
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activities
.
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In fact
, they should plan to visit any place every weekend or once
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a month to spend some quality
time
 with
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children
. By doing
this
, there will be a better understanding between parents and children, and the
communication
 will be transparent. To conclude, families should always set their children as
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riority
instead
 of their work schedules and jobs.
This
 helps to
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build
 a good
communication
 between the kids and parents, and the use of technology should be reduced while coming to
communication
 with family members.
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