A lot of advertisements for things like toys and fast food are aimed at children. Many people believe that these advertisements have a bad effect on children and their families. Do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Commercials have changed a lot in
this
contemporary world. During the inception of the idea of advertising, delivering correct information about the products and services available, without unnecessary add-ons, was its main motto. Linking Words
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Although
, today it has become one of the sources of brand popularity in Correct word choice
However
this
competitive era, supplying false and incomplete information.
Marketing targeting Linking Words
children
has grown, as they are easy to be pleasedUse synonyms
.
As a matter of fact, a child does not know what is good or bad for him/her, they tend to get attracted to almost anything with bright and shiny colours, even if it is of no use to them. Change preposition
with.
For instance
, my son once started crying over an electric train toy, wrapped in a dark red box with the engine visible and it had shimmery blue corners. I tried to convince him that it Linking Words
is
made for much older kids, but we ended up purchasing it. He got a mild shock Wrong verb form
was
while
playing with it and never touched it again. To give another example, Linking Words
couple
of days earlier, there was news of a kid who swallowed a piece of clay and thankfully nothing happened to him but these incidents create safety concerns.
Similar is the case with the fast-food chain's advertisements on both digital and print media. Some of the eatables are promoted by famous personalities, which the younger generation Change the article
a couple
adore
. Despite the fact, that these foodstuffs contain a huge percentage of preservatives and artificial colourings, which are harmful to Correct subject-verb agreement
adores
children
's health. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, these foods are advertised Linking Words
along-side
toys Correct your spelling
alongside
such
as Linking Words
happy meals
by McDonald's, Correct your spelling
Happy Meals
kinder joy eggs
, etc. The emphasis is always on the toy provided with cuisine when advertising to which Correct your spelling
Kinder Joy Eggs
children
Use synonyms
has
a great interest. These meals are rather expensive than a regular item on the menu. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Moreover
, fast-food commercials neither mention nor contain any healthy eatables in the meal itself.
In conclusion, I would say I agree with Linking Words
masses
who believe, Correct article usage
the masses
adolescent
age groups are more often targeted in various commercials. There should be a strict rule on safety and quality Correct word choice
that adolescent
check
on Correct subject-verb agreement
checks
kids
items and frozen or processed Change noun form
kids'
kid's
meal
for Fix the agreement mistake
meals
children
should be completely avoided as Use synonyms
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
contains
the highest amount of chemicals, preservatives and artificial colouring which can prove to be dangerous for health. Correct subject-verb agreement
contain
Children
must be encouraged to eat fresh vegetables and fruits.Use synonyms
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