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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the child’s education while others argue it is not so. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and opine

#people #sports #effect #child’s #education #opine
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 of magazines that people were buying in 5
differents
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 countries.
Also
, an expected
number
 of magazines sold is provided for 2025. Overall, The
number
 of
managazines
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magazines
 sold among the countries were different and in 2025,
this
number
 is expected to decrease in all the countries, except in Spain. In 2005, France was the country that sold more
managazines
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magazines
 at 40.000.
However
, in 2015,
this
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 decreased slightly and remained just at 38,000 approximately. In the US, from 2005 and 2015, there were more magazines sold, but in the future
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this
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 is expected to be at 25,000.
Similarly
 to France, The UK is expected to
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less
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 magazines in the future and by 2025 over 15.000 magazines are predicted to be sold.
Although
 the magazine sold in Italy rose from 2005 and 2015 about 5,000,
this
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 will fall significantly in 2025 and only 1,000 will be sold.
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, Spain had the lowest
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agazine sold at 5000.
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this
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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